Beyond The Lies.

Beyond the lies

A loving woman dies

Her heart broken in two

Only because she's been loving you.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems
Honest Opinion As Always.

Another poem I found today xD
Written a few months ago.

Reviews

[Stormy Weather]

Short and sweet. Wonderful :]

[Layla Anne Massaro]

Oh my, this shoot me to the point. So few words but everything's in it. Men just do not know how much they hurt woman because of love. Most of them are quite insensitive. I enjoyed reading this though I was expecting more stanzas. Excellent work.

...Layla...

[Rose]

Short yet powerful- I love it. Frankly, I'm a little jealous of this. Hahaha. Everything I write winds up a lot longer and more drawn out than I had originally intended.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. Told a complete tale in 18 words. Love can make us feel incomplete when separated and are alone. Thank you for a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

Short, straightforward but very deep. I've felt this before, and it does hurt...A LOT. But we die inside to love another, to give that person everything, hoping they'll return something, just something. It's a nice piece. Powerful and unraveling what is inside. I like it.

[Enigma]

Wow. That was good. Short and to the point and equally powerful. Well done.