Those Walls Of Bare Pale Skin.

Without you I'm nothing
”You're wrong!”

Nah, I'm nothing at all.

Those writings on the wall

“I WANT TO DIE!!!”
I still feel them..

Those walls... Aren't “normal” walls..

Those walls... Are my arms...

I still feel the structure..

Still I see the lanes of blood

Running down my bare pale arm

How I wish to make them disappear …

Still I regret what I did

Yet they'll be there...

Reminding me of my obsession..

Make them go away

I don't really care how...

It's just... I just want to get rid of them..

Yet they'll forever haunt me..

Darling

You make me forget

You make me see the bight side of life

With you I do not have to worry

My wrongs...

You tells me it's okay
“Everybody fail now and then.”

You made me quit my obsession..

All I want is to be forever yours.

I love you.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always~

Reviews

[Stormy Weather]

This is beautiful. It's truly amazing when you meet someone who can help shape you into what you need to be. That sounded kind've awkward, but you get the gist.

[Rose]

This is amazing! I can relate to this poem so easily. A very powerful piece, as always.

[Sleeping Maiden]

WOW. You took words I've had thoughts of before. This is stunning and motivating. Love is powerful. =D I know how it feels. I can relate to this piece. Thanks for sharing! I enjoyed reading this.

[Calypso]

And I'll choose to never love. No man can make me happy, I'll share my love in other ways.

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to be able to read your poetry. Love make us dance in the rain and have no fear. Can make us meek as a sheep also when we are alone and sad. I like the emotion and directness of the poem. I like the ending to your poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[stars are far]

nice write :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

'Without you I'm nothing
”You're wrong!”
Nah, I'm nothing at all.'

What a perfect beginning to this splendid poem, a perfect love poem, sooo love it :)

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Honestly I can't believe you put my exact feelings down. Haha, good write. :3