Admit It.

We all live to die
We all lie to tell the truth

We all hide our mistakes to seem perfect

We all find a path to follow

We all smile to cover up the hurt

We all fall to rise again

We all fall apart to pick up the pieces.

 

 

Admit it

We all make mistakes

No one's perfect

We can't pick up the pieces
If we doesn't fall apart

We can't live until we die.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[light and ashes]

So true, there is such wisdom here, very nice poem :] A few mistakes that I think you should go through and correct but other than that. But maybe you did these mistakes on purpose to point out that we aren't perfect just like this poem. If you did actually it would really make sense.

[Daydreamer54]

i didn't get the part where it said we all lie to tell the truth, but it makes you think! And i agree, life is about lwarning from you mistakes. great write! ^^

[Desmund Tiny]

wow ...great poem to point everything isn't perfect.

[Namelezz]

Wow this is so true! Love it. Great read.

~Namelezz~

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A perfect poem and perfect points made...brilliant :)

[Ruth]

Exactly..poignantly accurate, how else can we fix something if its not broken? I love this xx