Admit It.

We all live to die
We all lie to tell the truth

We all hide our mistakes to seem perfect

We all find a path to follow

We all smile to cover up the hurt

We all fall to rise again

We all fall apart to pick up the pieces.

 

 

Admit it

We all make mistakes

No one's perfect

We can't pick up the pieces
If we doesn't fall apart

We can't live until we die.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[Daytonight]

Well penned. Keep up the good work!

[Rose]

This poem contains great insight and wisdom. Don't change anything. I love it. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. Few perfect people on this planet. Mistakes make us wiser and smarter we hope? I like the complete poem. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Pure honesty you speak Fallen Heroine. This is blunt and doesn't hold back any emotions trying to be said. Yes, you pinpointed every single imperfection we humans make. I love this man.

[stars are far]

I agree 100% and you are right ..i loved it

[NZane]

Too true. Good job as always :)

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

So life begins to become fun, by the excitement we make of it. Nice insight by the way. And we do not live. We just are Undead. The Living are those who's lives were never filled with stuggleing, like the rich, like the intellegent, like the gifted. But the Undead, we live to see if there is any change and die when there is not. Great write!!

[Dayran]

And now that we know that, perhaps we can go on to have some fun with life, instead of forever standing in the dock, waiting for justice. Nice write!

[Gilbert Saint]

I think we fall apart to pick up the pieces. Apart from that, its good, simple but gets the message across, we aren't perfect, but does it mean we have to make mistakes? Anyway, watch what you write, you might just invent a doctrine or develop a mindset that may influence people the wrong or right way.

[Thea]

Absolutely full of truth! Simple but great! :)))