Darling Oh Darling.

Darling oh darling

I'm fine without you

Your shoal of insults made me see

That I had had enough.

 

 

Been entering the unknown spaces

Had a knife shoved in my back as I walked in

I should have said

"It's over!"
When you screamed at me the very first time.

 

 

"You'll walk away empty handed!!"
Maybe, maybe not
I have something you don't;
True friends

Friends who trust you

Friends who loves you for you

Friends who'd give up everything;

Just to see you smile
Will I walk away empty handed?

 

 

Do not come crawling up to me

You know I've burned my hands multiple times
I won't offer you an empty seat next to me

"Please... I beg of you Heroine..."
I have to refuse

"Once a mistake
Twice a fools error
Three times you're a dummy."

 

 

Darling oh darling

You have to realize;

I am perfectly fine without you.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[Margaret Marie Hubbard]

I agree, great friends will be there for you during tough times. :)

[Daytonight]

Great work! It is nice when you can come to that realization. Keep on penning.

[Rose]

I am sure that everyone can relate to this, but how few of us can really say that we'd be able to realize that the person is no good for us and to let them go?
Very well written, as always. :)

[light and ashes]

Love the last stanza especially the last line, magnificent poem. Acknowledging who you need in your life and who you don't is a step to happiness.

[NZane]

Without friends, we are nothing :) Good job as always ^^

[sarah]

really has a zing to it! I like it great write!

[Dahlia Phoenix]

When we break the pieces, we will find something better under the rubble. Sometimes others believe we aren't fine after losing someone but as time passes we see that our lives are better off without them ruining it. Amazing poem you've posted and I love the emotion put into it.

[xXxCynicalWarsxXx]

This was nice, in the ways you would say to a good writing. Thanks for the post.

[stars are far]

nice poem :)

[Dayran]

Catching up on the loved one on issues still outstanding....all's fair in love and war.