Rising.

Rising I am
Cannot feel those chains of sorrow

A smile so true

Can't find any reasons to cry

Because I have a thousand reasons to smile.

 

When I am with you

Everything's bearable

Not a single tear is dropping

Knowing you won't hurt me

Knowing you love me

Makes me wanna live forever.

 

Yet behind those happy days

I still feel like I did before

Scared of love

Scared that it may break me 

Tried to run

Tried to cut off this feeling

Way before we ended up together.

 

Yet no matter how scared I might be...

I will never let you go!!!
I love you Jacob.

 

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[Ama May Cooper]

loved it was sweet and adorable.....the true emotions of a dotimg lover

[Just Cat]

Awww... another heartfelt poem.

[Daytonight]

So much love poured out in this poem. Well done. Keep on penning.

[NZane]

I love the emotions in this poem. So sweet and sincere. Good job :)

[Desmund Tiny]

You expressed the love in this poem I like it...... ^^,

[stars are far]

This was so nice
i loved the feelings that you are showing :D
great piece

[joshua deathdealer]

Great write. Very positive.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very realistic poem...captures it all so beautifully...the full emotions. excellent :)

[Jeremy Baker]

I sometimes think love is the scariest emotion of all. All previous experiences taint each new encounter. You capture this aspect of love very well in you rpoem. Great job!

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice poem. I like the way you transfer fear to accepting love and happiness. Thank you for the outstanding poem. I like the positive ending.
Coyote