Not An Option For Me.

 Sometimes I wish I could disappear

Just like most people do

After all I can see
It isn't an option for me

So I'll walk away

Won't look back

This is where I will slay

All of the black.

Author's Note

Honest Opinion As Always :)
Ignore Grammar Problems xD

Reviews

[Just Cat]

I agree with the below comment, you do say so much in so few words. Short and sweet. Nice work.

[Daytonight]

You say so much in so few words. Well penned! Keep up the great work!

[Libby McKeown]

This poem is simple and elegant in the speaker's desire to "slay all of the black". The last lines completely make the poem. I would be remiss, however, if I failed to mention that the first line is too long and detracts/distracts from the core poem. It's too bulky. Read it aloud and you'll see what I am talking about. It kinda made me not want to give the rest of your poem a chance. But that's just me. After the line, the poem flows realy well and vocalizes well. Just my humble opinion. Keep writing!

[sarah]

This is really great it is strong and full of great emotion. I really enjoyed this great write!

[hmm]

Powerful and wonderful, So beuatiful.

[Margaret Marie Hubbard]

I believe ordinary people only pretend to go somewhere we can't find. The truth is we, as poets, know exactly how to escape....with our pen in hand! Great write!

[Enigma]

We all want to disappear at some point of our lives, questioning our existence, our purpose and the reason why we have to tackle so many obstacles in a single day, repeatedly. But that is life, and remains so.

Well penned. Short and simple.

[Coyote Poetry]

I begin my life four time. I sold all I could and left everything and begin a new life. Sometime I did well. I like the desire of this poem. You can disappear in a sense one day. Many options in a life. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[stars are far]

this was so sweet
i love that :)

[Dayran]

An encounter with the vicinity of the void. Its a situation where ' less is more.' Your passions are as important as your mind. ' Be still and ye shall know.'