You're All I See.

You're All I See.

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
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You're all I see in my dreams

Never felt this way before

This feeling's so different

It feels so real

Nothing can be compared to this!



 

I've never felt so alive

Nobody really tore down my walls

Yet you did it with no complication

Like it never really protected me.



 

Before you; my heart was shattered...

Shattered as a broken mirror

I couldn't find all of those bloody pieces

You took a glue;

Picked up the pieces

One by one you glued my heart back together.

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinoin As Always~

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This is so sweet. It's good to find someone that can pick up the pieces, just as long as the glue is strong enough to hold things together :)



Posted 12 Years Ago


Don't take this the wrong way, because this was very good. But it sort of made me feel a tiny bit old LOL, at least for myself it sort of reminded me what it was like to be 16 (not that I am saying your a kid or nothin) but i see a lot of youth in this. And when your young you have that power us older one's do not.

Youthful expression, can not be bought over the counter, online, or prescribed, but only comes in youth.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is so sweet :) Lovely. I'm glad you found someone to mend your broken heart, not everybody's that lucky ^^ Good job as always.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A beautiful love poem. Well done! Keep up the good work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


A strong poem of love. Sometime we are lucky. Find someone kind and gentle to make us strong again. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Awwww so sweet, one of the most sweetest writes I have ever read.
I liked this one alot...awesome write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Honest and direct, and somewhat introspective. Well written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like it. Sounds being more honest than you thought you could be about someone. Maybe another piece about what you fee like, at the same time? :-)

Posted 13 Years Ago


a lovely poem.......this poem shows that you're deeply in love with someone.... so sweet.... ^^,

Posted 13 Years Ago



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