Back Against The Wall.

Inspired By A Song.

Back against the wall

Watching black shadows across my body

Eyes wide open

Red eyes; watching me in joy

"What's going on?!"
I scream

"Nobody knows, You're all alone now!"

A silent whisper in my ear

A heavy breath on my bare neck

Cold strong hands around my arms

Tightens the grip

Ripping off my limbs.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always~

This is not poetry, it's inspired by BFMV's song "Watching Us Die Tonight"
:D

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

The visuals jump in a nice leap from victim to villain.

[Daytonight]

Very dark and scary. Well done.

[Kiri Nells]

Hmm... interesting write. :)
I've never heard the song before, I'll have to go look it up.
Thanks for sharing!

[Jeremy Baker]

Ths is a great expression of horror. One minor typo - the last line should have 'limbs' instead of 'limps'. Otherwise very expressive.

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Thrilling and enjoyable. :)
The despair of no one coming to help as the evil tears you to shred is pleasing to read. How dark and profound it is. Love it.

[Enigma]

Whoa. Creepy and horrific images wonderfully penned. Well done. :D

[Judas Hammer]

horror, i read with the light on. nice

[Coyote Poetry]

Feel like a scary movie. Where you think you are safe. Monster is standing next to you. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Becky C Strukamp]

Tis a lovely write.

[Just Cat]

Oooh this gave me chills! Nice work :)

p.s. BFMV are one of my favourite bands, *thumbs up* just for that :D