You're Not Worth My Tears.

I can't believe

I cut myself for you back then

A boy like you

Doesn't deserve my tears; nor my blood

Hang me by the neck

Cut my throat

I rather wanna die;

Than being with you.

 

 

Written By: A Fallen Heroine.

Date: 12th of September.

Dedication: I bet you know whom you are.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[Jenni 16]

This is fan_freaking_tasitc (x I.Love.It. It's filled with soo much emotion

[Daytonight]

So intense and raw. Full of pain. Keep on penning.

[Jeremy Baker]

You write about assertiveness after a hurtful experience with intensity and raw passion. I hope the motivation for this writing goes away, but not your style.

[stars are far]

this is nice and direct to the point
i loved this piece :)

[Enigma]

Raw and intense. As always.

[Desmund Tiny]

WoW..... This poem has strong emotions..... I love it........ great write... ^^,

[sarah]

Wow this is an intense write but very strong! great write!

[Dahlia Phoenix]

"A boy like you

Doesn't deserve my tears; nor my blood

Hang me by the neck

Cut my throat

I rather wanna die;

Than being with you."

This poem may be short but it expresses a strong regret that amazes me. Yes, some people aren't worth the cost of blood from our veins. They are meaningless.

[Stormy Weather]

Some people really screw you over and deduce you into nothing.
Full of emotion.
I like it ^_^

[Coyote Poetry]

A strong poem. Direct and powerful words made the purpose loud and clear. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote