Should We Go On As Friends?

This is more likely a letter than a poem...

Unfold myself to you

It will be the last time

I won't show

I can't be in a friendship with no trust...

Wanna keep me?

If so...

Don't share my secrets...

Ok?

Author's Note

Honest Opinion As Always...
I know this is not a poem at all.... It's more likely a letter..

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

Honest and open.. and wanting the respect of the secrets being honored... excellent:) x

[Dayran]

A fruit on a tree ripens and promises the continuity of life with its seed. A fruit yet to ripen must preserve itself. A failure here and the tree will not be able to forgive itself, for not preserving its young.

[NZane]

Great poem/letter, same as the comments below, simple, straight forward. I like it :) Thumb up ^^

[Becky C Strukamp]

A letter that says it all. Great write.

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Excellent message here,
Honest and straight forward.

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Trust is a test to prove your friendship and the wisest choice to prove your point in eight simple lines. Simple and direct. That's what I like about this poem. :)

[Jeremy Baker]

It speaks plainly a mesasge from the heart, with wisdom. I wouldn't change a thing.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Excellent message, and says everything perfectly without hesistation... great!!