"My Savior."

For You..

Betrayed and screwed over

Thought you could keep a secret

Now I know I was wrong

You're an open book

Just one touch; you will get the whole story.

Never thought you were like that

Thought you wouldn't betray me

Now I realize; you're no good to me

If you think you are, why did you do it then?

Thought you were My Savior?

My bestfriend?

Am I right or wrong?

Leave me here

Don't look back

Run away and hurt me.

Screw you!!

Written By: A Fallen Heroine.

Date: 8th Of September.

Dedication: My So Called "Savior"

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always~

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

Pain filled words.. I hope in the end some peace could be found...xx

[NZane]

It really is strong emotions in this poem, I can almost feel the betrayal. And I can definitely relate. Great job :)

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Wow!
very powerful emotions.
Sorry someone messed with you.

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Strong emotions flow through this poem from the great betrayal you feel, from knowing that your only friend would stab you in the back. This is nothing uncommon, it just depends on who you put your trust in.

"You're an open book
Just one touch; you will get the whole story."

The one who knows the whole story is the one who would get fucked in the end. I promise you that.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very honest and emotional write... I love the analysis of the situation that evokes emotions in the reader as it is adresses to the 'reader' rather than him/her...so that adds more power and intensity. Awesome read :)