"My Savior."

For You..

Betrayed and screwed over

Thought you could keep a secret

Now I know I was wrong

You're an open book

Just one touch; you will get the whole story.

Never thought you were like that

Thought you wouldn't betray me

Now I realize; you're no good to me

If you think you are, why did you do it then?

Thought you were My Savior?

My bestfriend?

Am I right or wrong?

Leave me here

Don't look back

Run away and hurt me.

Screw you!!

Written By: A Fallen Heroine.

Date: 8th Of September.

Dedication: My So Called "Savior"

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always~

Reviews

[Carrion.]

powerful.

[Daytonight]

I can so relate to this! Great writing! Keep it up!

[Enigma]

It is extremely frustrating and hurts equally bad to have your well kept secrets strewn around for everyone to know. I loathe such people. The anger you feel is justified and has, I guess, helped create another poem that is intense and frank.
Well done.

[Thea]

I can relate to it! Oh, it made me think of a friend who caused a lot of trouble to me by sharing my secrets to other people...
You penned your emotions very well! Love this piece... :)))

[Scarlett Letter]

Haha I Love It! Its Full of Honesty and Directness

[Sleeping Maiden]

Dang.. you really know to how channel your anger through your poems. Such pain overwhelms the words written. It's honest and direct.
Always a wonderful work from you!

[Desmund Tiny]

I can feel the anger in this poem. Being betrayed of your bestfriend, I can relate ...... very nice poem and I love it...... thanks for sharing.

[Jeremy Baker]

The raw anger and trauma here is palpable.

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong and direct words. Hard to find out someone you cared for. Broke your heart. I agree with the escape. Better to run then be burned a second time. Thank you for you excellent poetry.
Coyote

[stars are far]

pain ..this was well expressed