Mixed Feelings Of A Fallen Heroine

Mixed Feelings Of A Fallen Heroine

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
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Never thought I was able to love like this

Never thought I would be loved like this

Never really dared to reach for it

Forgotten how to reconcile my feelings and needs

Hidden within my locked heart of sorrow.

 

Caught up in the chaos of mind

Nothing were real

Everything felt like a dream-world

I was where I thought I'd never be

Kept telling myself to go further;

To move from the spot he left my dead corpse.

 

Feeling something once more

Love...

Afraid it may break me

Afraid that it will lay me to rest

Yet I trust you

I feel safe with you

Cannot be afraid of you.

 

Walking away from my misery

Yet it follow me wherever I go

Watching every step I take

Feeling a cold breath on my bare neck.

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems.
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I can really feel this write tug at the heart,
Such powerful feelings, so well written.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Coming back to something that has been very difficult before. Both may have learnt something new. There's a promise here of new hope.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Everything feels like a dream world and we keep waiting for it to end.....that is the place love takes us sometimes. Beautiful!

Posted 13 Years Ago


strong feelings expressed here.. good display of your emotional turmoil.

Posted 13 Years Ago


It's a frightening prospect to move on after being hurt,you conveyed the feelings and thoughts perfectly

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on August 22, 2011
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