Saved By An Angel From Above.

Saved By An Angel From Above.

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
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Embraced by the brightest light

Surrounded by dark

Air fill my lungs

I was above redemption

“I’m impossible to save…”
Yet, you did the impossible

You saved my stupid a*s

Picked up the pieces of my heart

Scattered all around the floor.

 

 

Caught up in flames dance

Won’t get down on my knees

Won’t fall from grace

An angel from above;

Came to me in my darkest hour

Saved me from myself

Saved me from this bloody hell.

 


Blood strewn across my body

Voices; screaming my name

“What Are You Gonna Do Now?”

It sends chills down my spine

Every each time I hear them in my head

“What I am gonna do? I will cut you off!”

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems Please.
Honest Opinion As Always~

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Sometimes we need to cut them off and embrace the light that surrounds us all....darkness is cunning! Great work love...beautifully woven!
xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


I liked the message.
Great job.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sends chills down my spine!
Great write

Posted 13 Years Ago


Awesome, the emotions in this poem are poignant and the meaning is really powerful. The light coming in and wrapping its self around you in the darkness. The last stanza is especially powerful.



Posted 13 Years Ago


"Saved me from myself .." I think each of us can be our own worst enemy at times. Powerful writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


An angel from above;
Came to me in my darkest hour
Saved me from myself
Saved me from this bloody hell.


I loved these lines. Brilliant!! The entire poem was great, but this four lines rang grabbed my attention. Excellent.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the message and the last stanza has that bite that is so good!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Perseus, Andromeda and Cetus. A rescue etched in the time of the mind.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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