Secure Arms.

Secure Arms.

A Poem by A Risen Heroine.
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Time passes by;
So much faster then I thought possible
It's almost been a week without you
3 more days, then I'm in your secure arms
I can't wait reallyI miss you so
I hope you miss me too
Yet I know you do
You're The One really
I've never experienced feelings THAT strong
I hope to god that you'll be mine forever.



I can hear you calling my name
Feeling your arms wrapped tight around my waist 
Lips pressed softly against mine
Longing for you is all I do
You're my one and only
No one can ever take your place.


I Love You 


Written By: A Fallen Heroine.
Date: 16th Of August.
Dedication: Jacob.

© 2011 A Risen Heroine.


Author's Note

A Risen Heroine.
Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always~

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This is a fine love poem, honest and well written.Good work from young poet with talent.Good work.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lovely

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very beuatiful heartfelt piece

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was beautiful, Lovely and a simple passion envelopes it all together.. well done



Posted 12 Years Ago


That's so sweet, I met a couple the other day, 33, they had been together since they were 16!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ooh I love the sweetness and dedication. Very lovely!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really like it. Love the last line. Keep on penning.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This is really amazing, I just adored your last stanza,
Such wonderful emotion in this write.


Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this poem, it's really sweet. Good job :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Awww....this is so sweet.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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