Blood Strewn Across The Walls.

Too many thought

Too many feelings

Too much pressure;

Never been a kid, really.

 

 

Never really made a stand

Always alone

Everyone seem to avoid me

What have I done to you?

 

 

Mind aches

Feeling my heart slow down

Heart sliced out as a throat of a slaughtered lamb

Blood strewn across the walls.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always~

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong words made the poem a pleasure to read. I like the strong statements and the powerful ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Daytonight]

Very intense but well done. Keep on penning.

[Tasha]

Intense and packed with raw emotions, excellent write.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Shy Girl]

From the title you had me already caught in the emotion of the piece. Each line opened more of the vein you were bleeding from...very strong, with a connection that comes out of lost youthfulness. Having to mature fast and wondering why that seems strange to some, and part of the sceme for you... =)

[Enigma]

Intense poetry, full of raw emotions. Well written.

[Day Dreamer]

Wonderful poem. Keep writing! :)

[Dayran]

In not making a stand we lose the sense of engagement to others. In getting along with others, they would expect that we are forming a tie that binds. You are obviously keeping yourself free and unattached in relationships.

[rwar ish me]

short but very stronge and powerful. Deep emotions. Vert nice

[Muse]

I liked the honesty in this write. You hold nothing back, and that make for a great read. :)

[nevermindfan1991]

This poem was very vivid, raw, and beautifully written. It was quite short but the poem was able to express so much emotion. Your always poems always amaze me!