P.L.A.Y.E.R.S.

I hate players.

P: playing around with your feelings.

L: lowlifes who doesn't care about others.

A: Always looking for a new f**k.

Y: Yes! Finally a girl who wants to play my game!
E: Everything I do, seem to invite her in!

R: Read between the lies, you easy girl.

S: Swallow my juices and be blinded by my smile.

 

Looking for a new f**k

Searching all over

Finally he laid his eyes on you

A drunken girl;

lost and alone.

 

Doesn't think

Doesn't react

Doesn't know what to do

Lost and alone you sit there.

 

Drunk and looking for your friends

Drunk and can't stand being alone

Meeting him

No idea who he is;

Nor what he wants.

 

A glint of lust in eyes

Searching for a place to be

Looking at others;

Thinking;

This drunken girl is mine!

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always~

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

WOW, gosh this is such a thrilling write! I loved every line. Its so intense it feels.. and so amazing. You definately had the emotions on the spot! Lovely read! I loved it. =D

[Becky C Strukamp]

OMG! This rocks big time. I Loved it. Loved the way you spelled out players.

[Coyote Poetry]

Someone is always the hunter and sometime we are the prey. I like how you told the story in this poem. Drinking does open opportunities for error. No weakness in this poem. Just a real story of prey and hunter. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[nevermindfan1991]

Wow, your poems always have so much passion and intensity. This has to be one of my favorite one so far. I liked the fact that you stuck it to the promiscuous male and female. Both are at fault. One is deceitful and the other is naive. Great Job, it was an amazing reading!

[Tasha]

Wow, this was amazing. I hate players they should all get a taste of their own medicine. Great write.
♥ Ta'Shandra