P.L.A.Y.E.R.S.

I hate players.

P: playing around with your feelings.

L: lowlifes who doesn't care about others.

A: Always looking for a new f**k.

Y: Yes! Finally a girl who wants to play my game!
E: Everything I do, seem to invite her in!

R: Read between the lies, you easy girl.

S: Swallow my juices and be blinded by my smile.

 

Looking for a new f**k

Searching all over

Finally he laid his eyes on you

A drunken girl;

lost and alone.

 

Doesn't think

Doesn't react

Doesn't know what to do

Lost and alone you sit there.

 

Drunk and looking for your friends

Drunk and can't stand being alone

Meeting him

No idea who he is;

Nor what he wants.

 

A glint of lust in eyes

Searching for a place to be

Looking at others;

Thinking;

This drunken girl is mine!

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always~

Reviews

[brenda]

agree ! i hate players ! and nce poem !:)

[Chris]

Stereotypes and a whole lot of lonely in this. Can a person hide in a 'pack' and laugh at the weaker selves that bleed more openly? - yep, often. People lie to themselves more often than to anyone else.

There ARE 'sick puppies' out here...but - all but the absolute sickest just want company when you get right down to it. and if its for mere seconds, well... seconds can be eternities.

Take Care,
Chris

[Daydreamer54]

It definitly descrbes tose type of people. Great write!

[Carrion.]

I agree with Jeremy;"It's accusing both sexes."
I don't even know why people call it a "game".
This poem is expressing anger,seduction,and sorrow.

[Jeremy Baker]

The anger and contempt leap off the page at the reader. You're right in accusing both sexes here; these people belittle and compromise others who refuse to play the game. Well written.

[*skittlez*]

this is amazing

[Dahlia Phoenix]

F****n' sick because there's no hope of her ever finding who she seeks only to be left with that sexual beast with no heart and no soul for that matter. I loved the way you found a meaning to each letter for the world "players" and the further you go, it becomes quite sad really because they are the ones who are left in the end.

[Black]

*ignores grammer problems*

a stunning write,
its like genious,
keep on writing

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A stunning write, full of meaning and emotion that I love :)

[BlueberryKisses]

I really like this poem, such a original write. I love how you have set it out, spelling out 'players' made this awesome. :)