This Is What I Really Want To Say.

Devastated and nearly kicked out

Falling; yet still standing

Falling apart; not a single tear has appeared

Standing in the pouring rain; not feeling it smashes against my skin

On the edge; yet I’m not jumping

Saying “Hi”. Yet I really mean “Farewell."

This is what I really want to say;

Farewell.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always~

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice way to express a farewell. I like the use of the underline words to strengthen each line. A perfect ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Brad]

the construction of this really spills out the emotion backing it

[Jeremy Baker]

The conflcit between opposites is presented clearly here - well written.