This Is What I Really Want To Say.

Devastated and nearly kicked out

Falling; yet still standing

Falling apart; not a single tear has appeared

Standing in the pouring rain; not feeling it smashes against my skin

On the edge; yet I’m not jumping

Saying “Hi”. Yet I really mean “Farewell."

This is what I really want to say;

Farewell.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always~

Reviews

[SinnerInspired]

Whoa, this is really something to think about

[Daytonight]

I liked this one. Sometimes we say one thing and really mean something else and expect everyone around us to understand.

[Caleb Pendleton]

Not sure why you use underlining in this. We hear the difference between the first part of through line and the second, so the any subtly this poem might have had is lost in the added emphasis.

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Sometimes we are cowards when saying the real thing because it hurts us along with the person we love dearest. No one cares to hear the truth so we change what we say. Its not a surprise really and I absolutely like the format you did it in with the underlining to the real words you would like to say. I go for favorites!

[Sleeping Maiden]

I love this piece! It shows us that sometimes we all don't say what we want to say. Its reality.. I love this poem so much. =D Its well written, short but has a good meaning to it. ^o^ Nicely done! Sometimes in our hearts, we want to say how we feel but a pulling feeling stops us at times. And we end up saying a whole different thing to the person we're talking to. I enjoyed reading this! =D

[sarah]

This is great we say so much but we seem to never say what we really want to. Great write! I really enjoyed this

[FemmeSpookyCorpse]

This is a fantastic piece! I love the form, the underlining to show importance, and the buildup to what you really wanted to say...wonderful! = ]

-Femme_Gothique (Brittany)

[Jvl narasimharao]

You are really very brave

[Becky C Strukamp]

I liked the structure. A very powerful poem. I liked it a lot.

[Carrion.]

interesting. I like this,(: