Choking On Your Lies.

Living a nightmare

No light is to find

Feeling a rage within;

Coming from the memories for you.

 

A pierced heart;

Tries to cover it all up

Nothing seem to be bearable

How come I should move on?

 

Living a lie

False hope, is for me to find

Feeling a relieve as I slice my veins open

Watching it all come crashing down.

 

My whole life is cracking

This time there's nothing to do

I won't keep breathing

It's way too late to save my living self.

 

You know, I loved you with all my heart

No matter how much damage you caused me

I was waiting for you

But I do not see you

You've left my sight.

 

I needed to hear you say;

"I love and need you by my side..."

Yet, I do not give a s**t anymore

I do not need you the way I did back then.

 

I've been staring blank at the wall

Waiting for a reason to live

I do not feel a loving hand

I do not want you to be my wall

I won't lean on you.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always~

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

Just amazing! I love it. The pain is showed so well... it hurts as I read. I can also relate a bit.. Such a strong write. =)

[Daytonight]

I can so relate to this! Well done!

[Muse]

My spelling sucks too sweetie, but that's why I use spell check, I then copy and paste my work here with fewer errors. You will get more positive reviews if you just do this extra step. Otherwise, I know it is written from the heart, many readers can relate to you, so keep on writing. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

It is hard to be in love and not having the love returned. A long time ago. I believe you could change someone. You can't. People must desire change and the taste of love. Time can change things. But few of us can wait for change. Life will take us to other places and we can forget the past.
""I love and need you by my side..."
Yet, I do not give a s**t anymore
I do not need you the way I did back then."
A strong ending to your excellent poem.
Coyote

[Daydreamer54]

this kinda sounds like a song to me idk why, but add a chorus and u got one. Great write!

[Maggie]

Love it:D Well done!!

[Raven Starhawk]

I can wholly relate. Sometimes you meet a person who can do nothing but lie and it is sucky. I have met my fair share of people who seem to lie nonstop. Love this poem. ^^*

[brenda]

i like the imagery at the end !:)

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Honestly, this is almost predictable but everyone has a way of showing what they feel and the expression within the words. I do love this poem nevertheless and choking on your own lies it seems to be hiding the reality of what's going on. Something to live with like a parasite. Nice job Heroine~

[The fallen of innocence]

LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!