Broken Wings.

My broken wings;

Can bear now

I am finally free

Nothing has a grip of me now

Nothing clues me to this world

Nothing but my increasing strength.

 

Writings on the wall

"I WANT TO DIE!!!"

Are haunting me

I feel their structure;

Digging into my skin

Ripped scars open

Watched the red delicious blood run down.

 

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always~

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

Gosh, I love it!! Deep and so vivid... this is just wonderful!

[Daytonight]

Another great write! Keep on penning.

[Coyote Poetry]

To bleed for someone is a gift the missed person won't care about. Better to write down words and find a new reason to live. Love is a part of life. The other parts are needed to become whole in body and soul. A strong poem. Never freedom from pain and memory. Just engraved tattoos on our kids to remind us. Share kindness and love with the deserving. Not to give pity. Thank you for a excellent poem. Your words always made me think.
Coyote

[SinnerInspired]

Outstanding write!

[nevermindfan1991]

Another amazing, powerful poem. Keep it up!

[Just Cat]

Vivid descriptions and powerful words.
Another piece nicely done.

[Jvl narasimharao]

No grammar mistakes but GREAT optimism and freedom.Who can stop you?
yours JVL

[Dahlia Phoenix]

The power of words can bring up many settings on what's occurring but this is nicely written with force and something of hope and pleasure.

[Marie Harrison]

Strong imagery that sticks with the reader

Powerful. Hits hard.