Dancing On My Own.

I feel air fulfil my lungs

My heart beats Optimal now

I’m free now

I cannot feel the cage anymore

It vanished right in front of my eyes

Worries grew bigger and bigger

They became a huge parasite

A parasite I couldn’t handle

Yet it's bearable now

I can handle what I have to

I am dancing on my own now

No need to have a partner

Beyond all this pain you caused me

I rose from the spot;

Where you left my corpse

 

 

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always~

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the way you expressed your desire and freedom from pain. Life allow us to test the water of life and become wiser. I like the ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Jeremy Baker]

Nice positive message.

[Jvl narasimharao]

You are absolutely free now.YOU ROSE FROM THE SPOT.A nice poem indeed
yours jvl

[SinnerInspired]

Awesomeness! Love the title!
100/100

[FallenHeroXx]

But you'd do it all over again if we had the chance

[Carrion.]

omg.:D
anyways. Very good imagery and I love how in the end it says "I rose from the spot;
Where you left my corpse" it's deep, and it shows you've moved on. :DD very very very good(:

[Lily Mae]

Dark.. I like it...the end was perfect...