The Urge.

I feel the urge beneath my skin

I can't handle it, not anymore..

It's digging so deep..

I'm wounded for life..

It won't heal..

It feels like..

I feel..

Devastated..

Lonely..

Suicidal..

You know...

It's all the same..

Yet...

It's taking me over..

"The urge is all talk"

No...

That urge is real..

Nothing's made up..

Nothing can stop it..

Dark had taken a tight grip of my arm..

I can't escape..

Pain from within is taking me over.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems..
Honest Opinion As Always..

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Pain can steal hope and dreams. The poem describe a emotion of the desire of sadness overcoming dreams and the possibilities of hope. No weakness in this excellent poem.
Coyote

[Daytonight]

I can relate to this. I think we all have dark times when we seem to be almost dragged down into the blackness and pain.

[hmarieee]

The pain takes over but don't let it rule your life. I really love this write just like i do all of your poems. Beautifully written.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Gosh... amazing like always. I can relate to this piece so well. I love it.
The pain overwhelms the poem and basically the emotions here are simply well described! Great write!

[Dahlia Phoenix]

This is exquisite. With every line, the domination of pain is taking over your body and there's the fright of what to do, how to react under these circumstances. Beautifully written and the urge will sometimes be more dominant than the mind itself even if it means destroying them whole.

[WynterPhoenix]

Very nicely done. I've written many poems on the topic at hand. I read a lot of poems about this, but this is definitely one of the better ones. Great write.

[Magic plus the mayhem.]

I love this. "The Urge." is something many people feel. In this pome you put that is such a way anyone could feel it. Great write :)

[nevermindfan1991]

The urge is real, and I have felt it. This poem was beautifully written and was able to express the pain that comes from these pounding urges. Great job, I enjoyed reading this!

[Just Cat]

This pulls at my heart and brings up a hell of a lot of dark memories for me. The 'urges' you speak of are my own demons, so I can relate to this so much it's unbelievable.
Dark, heart wrenching, saddening... Bluntly honest and open.
Another great piece. :)

[SinnerInspired]

Nice poem
Very cool