Die With A Smile.

Hold your head held high

You sure are strong enough

I've known you for so long, I know you can do it.

 

“I’m living a nightmare…”

Please, oh please think positive

Life’s not a nightmare

I know I’m not the one to say, but believe me

Everything’s going to be alright.

 

I’ll make you happy, even if I die trying

I’ll die with a smile

Knowing that I did something for you

Something that you’ll remember.

 

Written By: A Fallen Heroine.

Date: 25th of July.

Dedication: Everyone.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always~

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem a lot. We need to leave a memory of us. I like the honest words with a strong ending. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Calypso]

Nice write

[Daytonight]

Dying trying to make someone happy seems such a worthwhile cause. Well done.

[hmarieee]

Dying with a smile to make someone else happy, that's sweet. i like it

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Dying doing something rather than doing nothing at all is the best lesson here. To comfort the person who is being tortured by their own demons and helping them to go by them. Yes, life is difficult but we must continue on no matter what. This is touching.

[Just Cat]

Dying trying to save someone is a good way to go in my opinion. And dying with a smile sounds good too. Knowing the last thing you did was good is always a plus.
Interesting and thought provoking work.

[Thea]

Simple but really convincing! Even the title catches the interest of some readers... :)

[Stormy Weather]

This is really neat!

[Jeremy Baker]

Beautifully dark and yet hopeful at the saem time - great write!

[Carrion.]

I really like this. it has a deep meaning:)