I Am A Wall.

You can lean on me

I am your wall

Everything will glance off of me

Nothing can harm me

I'm immune

Nothing can break my walls

Except one thing

And that one thing,

Will be forever in mind

I'll be the hands who catches you as when you fall

The open minded when everyone else won't see you for who you are

The heart that will hold yours forever in time.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.~

Reviews

[SinnerInspired]

Wow, I think we all need a friend like you
Someone we can trust& feel safe with...
Love it

[Jeremy Baker]

You'd be a good friend to anyone who needs you - good writing!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the desire of this poem. A offer of safety is a great gift. Few offers are given and when someone is kind and willing to love and protect you. The gift is of great value.
"I'll be the hands who catches you as when you fall
The open minded when everyone else won't see you for who you are
The heart that will hold yours forever in time."
Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Thea]

So sweet..."I'll be the hands who catches you as when you fall", that line is just striking! Great poem... :)))

[light and ashes]

A beautiful,sencere,strong,empowering,selfless poem.

[Nikita]

Are you my long-lost twin?!?!?! How do you get everything i feel! lol great poem again i love it!!
Nate

[Lily Mae]

This is an amazing write...so often "the wall" the one with the support is overlooked during life and yet who do they lean on in times of trouble? Yep, they lean on the wall...x Great write..xx

[Desmund Tiny]

I love it!!!! ^^, especially these lines "You can lean on me
I am your wall" I can relate to this poem...... great write......

[Carrion.]

love it.(: your poetry is amazing ^-^