Hold On Tight.

Hold on tight

I won’t bow to the presence of you

I’ll turn my back

I won’t let you let you hit me straight

If you’re going to shove a knife deep into my spine

I won’t slit my throat with the bloody knife

A little whisper from within

Nothing more than a prayer

Whispers to me; Please Take Me Back

Yet I’ll turn my back to you

Wish your sanity good luck

It had a one-way ticket to far far away

Your voice has turned into a whisper

A whisper I ignore

You ripped my heart in two

It were just a game to you

Since you left me in the side road of my life

I’ve been able to take a deep breath

Just to feel the air fulfil my lungs

I won't pick up the pieces you left

You know, I' took a step further

Nothing will be the same

You left me undone

Yet I've stitched my broken heart.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[Helpless]

nice

[Nikita]

Just like me =) strongest at the end..i always come out the strong one and im glad you do too! x

[Lily Mae]

Your work just keeps getting stronger... I love it..x A great emotional write..xx

[Brad]

an excellent analogy of pulling oneself from the ashes like a phoenix...nice job

[SinnerInspired]

Love the ending, shows that even when your broken you can fix yourself

[Hello, Goodbye]

fantastic write.. great imagery, as well as a good range of feelings and emotions.. the structure made this an easy read.. great poetic expression..

[Becky C Strukamp]

I love the fighting back, stitching a broken heart.

I won't bow to the presence of you. Excellent beginning for this poem.

An enjoyable read. I liked it a lot. You penned the emotion of this piece quite well.