I Long For You.

Here's a poem I found today. I wrote it back then Fallen broke up.

I want to see him smile because of me

I want to hear those three words

I want to feel his loving hands on my cheeks

I want to feel his soft lips pressed softly against mine.

 

 

Nightmares becomes daymares

Your presence haunts me

I still feel you in my sleep

Daymares are worse than nightmares

I will never have a break

You’ve crossed my mind so many times

You always do

I don’t love you like yesterday

I love you even more

Since you broke up

My feelings of you have grown so…

 

 

 

Since you left I’ve been so hollow

I didn’t care at all

I can’t keep track of things

I can’t do this

That agreement….

I still follow it…

It’s like… it’s the last thing I can do…

Written By: A Fallen Heroine.

Date: 5th of June.

Dedication: A Fallen Hero

 

Author's Note

I found this poem today, and decided to publish it.
I do not feel the same way, I don't want to pick up the pieces, just to let you guys now.

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[SinnerInspired]

Nice, I felt true emotion with this poem

[Sleeping Maiden]

You did well with the emotions. Your feelings are expressed nicely. Great job! I like it.

[Gilbert Saint]

Its great, i agree with the rest, you did well publishing it too.

[Hello, Goodbye]

I completely see myself in these words and am readily familiar with all its feelings.. you express the notions plainly but very much candidly apt... good write..

[Tasha]

You penned this very well. Excellent job.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Carrion.]

i like it:3

[Becky C Strukamp]

You penned well the feeling of wanting and not getting. Excellent Poem.