Nothing Is Real

I want you to know the real me

No one really know me as well as you do

No one can ever understand me as you do

I don't want it to end this way.

I'm hitten right to my heart

I don't really care about anything

Not anymore.

Everything's so unreal

It's like, no matter what happens...

It doesn't happen at all

Even though I know it does.

I've never felt this way

It's so confusing

My mind and heart stops me.

How come I can't get rid of this?
It's tearing me apart

Dark's eating me up from within.

YOU SHOT ME!!

What would you do it I told you to stay away?

What would you do if I told you to leave me alone?

What would you do?
What would you do?

What would you do?!

My sky turned black

Yet this time it were your fault

Not mine

How I hate to admit it..

How come I can feel as terrible as I do?

I haven't cried in a few months

Yet nothing had happened tonight

It's just...

It feels like...

Nothing.Is.Real.

Nothing.Is.Real.

Nothing.Is.Real.

Nothing.Is.Real.

Nothing.Is.Real.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[Daytonight]

This seemed like a surreal song. Well penned. Keep up the great work!

[Gilbert Saint]

Said like a falling heroine. Its good, but didn't like the nothing is real*...part

[Chris]

How many can be YOU right now!!!... The central YOU... the how could this be???? How your mind feels like you're standing beside EVERYTHING and not in or even a part of anything...

You reached a good place to further develop your personal awareness and interpersonal understanding. Real or not doesn't matter - you touched the POINT of it all - what existence is about... our own awareness of reality.

Take care,
Chris

[Nr. Nine]

what can I say? Me=like that write :) nice write ;)
Nr. Nine

[FemmeSpookyCorpse]

I loved the way you've played with the form in this piece! With the setup you've chosen, it creates a strong feeling of despair, and with your word choice, it helps one to really think about matters of the heart. I love this piece, it's beautiful!

[Nikita]

GAH i love it, it had me hooked and then it drowned me great expression and feeling =)

[Just Cat]

Strongly expressed. Sounds like a song.
Nice work as always.
:)

[SinnerInspired]

Thats the way I feel right now Good work

[Desmund Tiny]

Strong emotions..... I love it..well expressed........

[Sleeping Maiden]

Very compelling poem! I love it so much! =D The emotions is so strong. And love can be complicated...its like is it an illusion or is it real... love love this poem! Great write! Thanks for sharing. ^o^