Little Girl.

Little girl in the rain

Walking alone, no one care

All you see is dark shadows

The one you love doesn’t notice your pain.

 

Love is all you give

Nothing more than pain is what you receive

You really wish for a better life

Yet it seem to be out of reach.

 

You walk around in silence

No one see the breaking heart; behind your fake smile

Couples walk around hand in hand

All you wish is; someone to understand.

 

Pain’s eating you up from within

You feel your heart break when you see THEM

Cuddling and kissing down the street

He see right through you, as if you were air.

 

But…

He doesn’t think about it in that way.

He need air to survive.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[Desmund Tiny]

T.T I can relate .........
"You walk around in silence
No one see the breaking heart; behind your fake smile
Couples walk around hand in hand
All you wish is; someone to understand."

I think these are my favorite lines......

[Akshat♥]

Everyone here living in this world has to fight ..
sometimes live lonely..
love is everything we have:)
we need air to survive but it has gases which is useless for us..
keep writing..

[misha]

This is an interesting piece. You did a good job on this. Keep it up!

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THEM; meaning got. Your expression here is great. Clever closing lines.

[frozensakura]

wow wonderful write so relateable(:

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime easy to feel alone and disappointment.
'Cuddling and kissing down the street
He see right through you, as if you were air."
Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Stormy Weather]

Quite the relateable piece. I think my favorite lines are,
"Cuddling and kissing down the street
He see right through you, as if you were air."
Amazing.
Great job, as always.

[Daytonight]

So very poignant and yet so very well done. Keep up the great work!

[SinnerInspired]

AWWWW How sad

[Hello, Goodbye]

very solid write..