Ashes.

A Collab A friend and I did. He's not here on writers, yet here's some credit. He's the victim and I'm the bully. He's one of the most happiest boys i know that wrote that part of the poem :D

Victim’s P.O.V

 

Don't light the cigarette

When the fire comes

I start to burn my skin

My skin is darkening

Like my mind

I have no one around

To give me a helping hand

Reach my hand

And you get burned

I’m meant to be alone

Forever and ever

I’m burning in hell,

With no source of help,

I’m all alone with no one to help,

I’m by myself and I’m burning up.

I reach for a helping hand, but they turn me their back

They just ignore me, and let me burn, like they want me to....

 

 

Bully’s P.O.V

 

I did it

He’s all alone

No one to help

He’s vulnerable now

I can have what I want

He won’t fight against me

He’s going down

He wishes for a better life

A helping hand?

But he’s burning on the ground

Nothing more than a puppet in Devil’s servitude

I watch him lying there, lost and alone

 

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

Love the collaboration here. Great work and read. The two of you penned this well.