Not Strong Enough.

I can breathe now

Thanks to you I won’t bow

You made me stronger

Now that I’m out of sight

I may be out of mind

Am I right, or wrong?

Oh well

I don’t care

It’s up to you

She’s so gonna f**k up your crumbling sanity

Do you believe in me?
I already knew you didn’t

But I am right, you couldn’t handle my life

How come you can handle hers?

You know you can’t, yet you’re trying

I take my hat off for you

You’re brave

But not as strong as you should be.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[Chris]

Peeps want 'honesty' 'til its given... and yes honesty CAN be wrong, it can assume, hell both can and often DO honestly assume. This one couples with a wanting of 'forevers' - yes?

We stand on our feet 'til our world crumbles... sometimes a hand will reach into the dust cloud and sometimes it won't.

Chris

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Raw words.........emotion packed......well done.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Whoo! Go girl! (whoever this poem is for). I can relate to your poems so well. I like this piece. Strong emotions is shown and its powerful. And whoever the person is.., is not worth your love. Great write though! Keep on writing as always!

[Jvl narasimharao]

He is not strong enough for your love.Your poem is very natural

[Lily Mae]

You shoot straight from the hip and sometimes you have to so your heard... great write..x

[M.Babu]

The clarity and strength in your tone is almost philosophical:) It adds some character to the words and really accentuates the image they create.

I liked this piece:)

[Layla Anne Massaro]

That's the spirit...I always can relate in your poems...Don't know why...lol

[Calypso]

You have a lot of strength, but in a different way.

[Thea]

Wow...I can relate to it! This is such a very well written poem filled with strong emotion... :)

[Becky C Strukamp]

Frustration, anger, love, pain, its all there.

I like the line. ( I can breathe now ), I think this line is the essence of the poem. Very well expressed and penned.