Not Strong Enough.

I can breathe now

Thanks to you I won’t bow

You made me stronger

Now that I’m out of sight

I may be out of mind

Am I right, or wrong?

Oh well

I don’t care

It’s up to you

She’s so gonna f**k up your crumbling sanity

Do you believe in me?
I already knew you didn’t

But I am right, you couldn’t handle my life

How come you can handle hers?

You know you can’t, yet you’re trying

I take my hat off for you

You’re brave

But not as strong as you should be.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Life teaches us our strength and limits. Each of us will test the boundaries. I did like the positive ending. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[madmocha]

Very well done. Strong. You never need those. They're not worth it. Good writing.

[Dragon]

I can feel the relief that had finally made you stronger than the feelings passing by. Nicely done on this one for sure. :)

[FallenHeroXx]

How about you get the f**k out of my face with this s**t Sandra... You'll end up f*****g something more important than you ever were up.. You'll end up f*****g me up.. Or "him" i should say... For the sake of f**k man... He's up to his neck in deep s**t over Her... Just leave it for now... Please?

[Daytonight]

It's rough when something like happens. But like you said, it will make you stronger. Great write! Keep up the good work.

[Just Cat]

I like the rawness and the bluntness in all of your poems, and I can relate to the theme of this one yet again.
If this is based on true events... I hope you're as strong as you could be.
Good work :)

[nevermindfan1991]

Nicely done, great structure and very engaging.

[Carrion.]

epic.
he's found another girl? Im sorry. Sounds like your moving on, slowly though.
very good. use writing to help you get along.
absolutely amazing:D

[sarah]

Such a strong write so full of truth and power! So great I always love your writings!

[FemmeSpookyCorpse]

I loved this = ] It conveys strong emotion, while you meaningfully put some lucky duck in their place...sometimes, it needs to be done. I loved the straightforward word choice...it made your points much clearer (and stronger.) This piece flowed beautifully...awesome work, my dear = ]