Without You.

Its been 38 days without him..

“I can’t… I’m sorry..”

Its been 38 days without you

I’ve nearly reached the end.

 

I walk around in silence

My life is so hollow

I’m so devastated.

 

I feel your hands in mine every each time I walk down the street

Your arms around me in my sleep

And I see you everywhere I go.

 

Your presence still linger here

I can’t forget about you

You’re haunting my dreams.

 

Nightmares become daymares

I feel you no matter what I do

How come can I get through?

 

My life seem to be worthless

No, I’m not worth saving

I gave you my heart.

 

You are the only one I want to spend my life with

But you threw it in a car and walked away¨

Nothing seem to be real anymore.

 

So I walked into your room today

With a gun in my hand, I pointed it at my head

You screamed no and ran up to me

I shed a tear and blew my brain out.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[The fallen of innocence]

an undying devotion put to its end, so sad yet well written and moving. i love it

[nevermindfan1991]

This such a powerful and grim piece about someones undying devotion to another. Not willing to let go, not willing to survive without the other. This was beautifully written and the ending was just unexpected. I loved reading this poem and great job!

[Just Cat]

Ooooh jeez!
Wow... a very powerful piece. Sad, but powerful.

[sarah]

oh goodness this is so intense and sad! But really really powerful!