Dumbfuck.

Lets make this last one more night

I’ll come crawling up to you

Say your last prayer

Lets make the good times show

In case your so called “god” doesn’t show

Try to get me out of your mind

I’ll whisper to you every single night

You’re no leading man

I’m the one wearing the pants

You find happiness in others sadness

Shut your mouth and listen up dumbfuck

I’ll come to you all naughty

Make you long for me

Make you want my body

Then turn you down

Who got the pants now, huh?

You better watch your back

Don’t mess with me

I’ll drag a knife

And backstab you to death.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[Brad]

remind me never EVER to piss you off... :))

[The fallen of innocence]

wow, the way u said it just shocked me, rly great

[nevermindfan1991]

I couldn't wait to read this poem once I saw the title "Dumbfuck", and it was worth the wait. This was incredible piece. It had so much angry, and fury without becoming unsavory. You were able to express your feelings constructively without losing the spirit. Though I thought it was a bit to dark at end, but that's what makes it your poem. Another great piece from you! Great job!

[Just Cat]

Wow... very strong, powerful but scared me a little to be honest!

[sarah]

This is very dark but we all have those fury moments

[Sleeping Maiden]

WOW. gosh.. lol. I can definately feel anger as I read this. Nice write! Heh, no one should ever mess with you! But you know how its a saying, "Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" This poem hits it!

[Daytonight]

Wow no one had sure better mess with you! Great write. Keep on penning.