Dumbfuck.

Lets make this last one more night

I’ll come crawling up to you

Say your last prayer

Lets make the good times show

In case your so called “god” doesn’t show

Try to get me out of your mind

I’ll whisper to you every single night

You’re no leading man

I’m the one wearing the pants

You find happiness in others sadness

Shut your mouth and listen up dumbfuck

I’ll come to you all naughty

Make you long for me

Make you want my body

Then turn you down

Who got the pants now, huh?

You better watch your back

Don’t mess with me

I’ll drag a knife

And backstab you to death.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[brenda]

dang! harsh but loved it keep writing !:)

[Valandil93]

Extremely well done and effective. I love it.

[kirsten773]

holy crap.
thats all i can say.
i loved it!
holy crap!
5000/100

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

poetically tragic yes.

[Coyote Poetry]

You always amaze me with your thoughts and desire in your words. I like the directness and honest words in this poem. Woman that carry guns and knifes have always left me with some fear. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Stormy Weather]

Brutal, but awesome!!!! :) I love it!

[Namelezz]

Oh I wanna send this to him so bad!
Great write, love it!
Keep it up, Darling!

[Carrion.]

love it. betrayal.
and what seems like athieism?

[FemmeSpookyCorpse]

This is such a powerful poem, and really conveys the emotion and strength women have as well (my opinion). Your word choice is raw, driven, and fantastic. You threaten, but with a strong sense of self, and I like that. You really show whom the person with more power is. Very nice poem...keep writing! = ]

[Becky C Strukamp]

Very emotionally packed expression of showing ones inner strength and not letting the other walk on them.

I’m the one wearing the pants..I love this line.

Well penned and expressed. Love it.