Where Art Thou?

Where art thou?
I'm stumbling through

I can't find the exit..

I grope in the dark

Trying to reach out for your light

Don't leave me like this..

I tried...

I failed...

If you were me, then you'd be screamin:

"Someone shoot me!!!"

I'm lost in the dark

I can't find the path

Who made it dissapear?..

I'm sorry I ain't crying

I got to keep my head held high

But trust me... I'm crying on the inside..

Please come back...

Yet I know you won't..

Author's Note

Written on that night Fallen Broke up...
Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[deeps]

Kind of sad really, yet the emotions are really powerful

[...]

A feeling of panic, loss even. All you once trusted in; gone. I like the format. The emotions you conveyed are felt in every word. Well done.

[Hello, Goodbye]

desperation indeed

[Sukriti Suki]

I like this....it is honest, sincere and shows the pain. If you were me you'd ask to be shot...that's a deep thought.

[Brad]

such desperation of fathomless dread

[Carrion.]

absolutely amazing,
It seems you've changed your writing a bit.
that, or its just cos i havent been on in awhile XD

[Daytonight]

So very sad. Well done! Keep on penning!

[Coyote Poetry]

The emotion was strong. Filled with sadness and understanding that sometime things lost can't be found. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Dragon]

The feelings you put into this poem means a lot. There are many emotions you put into this and I like the way how you end this. Great write.

[Becky C Strukamp]

I feel the pain, anguish, dispair of a broken heart...so emptied, so lost , so torn. Well penned.