Questions.

Do I remember when we first met?

-Yeah.

Do I remember our first conversation?

-Yup.

Do I remember the first time, we planned to visit?

-Yeah..

Do I remember what I thought of you as I saw you in the city?
Yeah... I remember it all too well..

Do I remember our first hug?

Yeah... so warm..

Do I remember our first busride?

Yeah... We talked all the way home..

Do I remember our first dinner together?

Yeah... we had a lot of fun.

Do I remember our playfight?

Yeah... You got me down like I was a feather...

Do I rememer when we sat talking, all out of sudden you said something funny, then kissed me?

Yeah... I remember our first kiss  like it was yesterday..

Do I remember all of those lovely memories?

Yeah... and I miss them so..

Am I still in love with you?

Yes...Yes I am...

Would I want to get them back?

Yeah, maybe a little more than I should..

Do I miss your presence?

Hell yeah..

Do I want you to come back home?

.......No.......

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opninion.

Yeah, again, this piece ain't as poetic as it could be.
But I had to vent.
So~ I don't give a damn.

Reviews

[Thea]

Very emotional and well written!! ^^

[Brad]

one of my favorites from you

[Daytonight]

What better place to vent than here? Great write. Keep up the good work and vent all you want.

[Namelezz]

Wow... You stunned me and I took every word in and thought about it.
This is such a great write, so lovely.

~Namelezz~

[Coyote Poetry]

The good days of life are when we open new doors. I'm old and have a lot to remember. I wouldn't take away anytime spend with the people who can still make me smile 35 years later. I like how you told the story. Life is fair in the end. If you maintain a heart with hope and kindness. Good things will come. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Carrion.]

amazing.
it shows in that your trying to move on,
but its nearly impossible.
"walking away" is alot harder than it seems.
i myself expeirenced this...
keep writing.

[M.Babu]

This read magnificently my friend...the emotion built up constantly as we read along and then culminated like fireworks towards the end.

The pain and longing in your tone is evident and powerful...it feels so authentic that the reader cannot help but feel attached to the persona...which happens to be you....and the beautiful cascading thoughts that are reverberating across their mind.

Fantastic piece, if you ask me!

~M.Babu~

[Becky C Strukamp]

Lots of emotions..one changing into another. I like the structure. Nicely done!