So Sick.

I’m left dying here in the dark cold alley

No one is strong enough to bring me back to my living self

I lay there; rotten and nowhere to be buried

I jumped out the second floor and broke my legs for you

You knew I did it all for you

I wanted you to know how much I love you

I still want you to know though

Know what?

F**k it.

I don’t give a s**t.

Yeah I’m smiling, a big fake smile, but inside I’m dying.

 

 

I’m so sick of crying

I don’t feel like trying

So I’ll lay here dying.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion.

Reviews

[Carrion.]

last three lines. absoulutrly amazing, definatly keep writing, natural talent:D

[Forest Green]

Crying is the first step to starting over...eventually it lessens in frequency and fervency and the healing will begin.

Your verse has much truth in it with many words of desperation...an expressive write...!

[Magic plus the mayhem.]

I love the dark imagery in this. Great write!

[Cherrie Palmer]

heart breaking place to be- good job of expressing