So Sick.

I’m left dying here in the dark cold alley

No one is strong enough to bring me back to my living self

I lay there; rotten and nowhere to be buried

I jumped out the second floor and broke my legs for you

You knew I did it all for you

I wanted you to know how much I love you

I still want you to know though

Know what?

F**k it.

I don’t give a s**t.

Yeah I’m smiling, a big fake smile, but inside I’m dying.

 

 

I’m so sick of crying

I don’t feel like trying

So I’ll lay here dying.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion.

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

such deep and sad emotion, nice rhyming, nice ending, great title simple but it fits nicely, i love this line:
"Yeah I’m smiling, a big fake smile, but inside I’m dying."
... really great poem.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

I gave my all and then some and now I lie here broken and bleeding with a smile for you........do you even care?

[alerodri]

sometimes when we fake smile we r not convincing other but our self we r happy than been said, love the poem but try not to use swear words they r so comun they take away inpact from your poems
20 ,10 or 5 years ago it would be a different story

[Sleeping Maiden]

GAH, omigosh.. i love this. So relatable!! Crying is normally one of the best ways to let emotions out.. or at least i find it helpful. Beautiful piece! =D

[Coyote Poetry]

A very strong poem. I like the movement and the desire of the poem. Easy to fall down when sadness overtake us. A strong ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Lily Mae]

You've penned these emotions well.. Being taken to the place of wanting to lay there and die, is soul crushing.. Great job..xx

[Becky C Strukamp]

Oh yes, those fake smiles and the reasons for them ..lovely poem!

[Thea]

Some things really hurt...I can feel it in your poem...Crying is one way of relieving your burden and that's good...After that, you'll become stronger...Even if you face the biggest problems in your life...Never give up...Somebody will come for you at the right time...This poem was totally a great piece of you...Keep writing! ^^

[Daytonight]

Sometimes we put on a fake smile for others so they don't see all the pain we are really in. Love the last three lines. Keep on penning.

[Just Cat]

Wow... a powerful write here. You're very talented!
"I’m so sick of crying
I don’t feel like trying
So I’ll lay here dying."
^--- Love the last part especially.