Meant To Be.

Fire in your eyes; gone as the wind

Gentle touch of yours; oh so lovely

Soft kisses from your lips; oh how I miss them.

 

I never meant to break your crumbling sanity

I never meant to f**k up your mind

You never meant to hurt me

All you wanted was to protect me.

 

We were happy

We were sad

We never meant to be apart

We had planned every little piece of our future.

 

You should know; I’m not mad at you

Nor hate you

I can’t, you still mean the world to me

A Fallen Hero… 

I still like you more than I should.

 

Don’t come back.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[Calypso]

Sweet piece

[Gilbert Saint]

You still like the subject but don't want him back, paradox. But i like the first stanza, you begin from the unknown, talking generally, then finally reveal you were talking of love... and all that, its great.

[Coyote Poetry]

No good come out of a separation. In my lifetime. My mother was the only one who could keep ex-husbands as friends. All the people Involved in my life in affair of love are gone and not forgotten. I like the tone of the poem. Trying to reach for a peace that can't be found. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[alerodri]

true is that time when u love a person but they have been so rude , cruel to u , it is imposible to think of a realationship
u love them , but do not want to be with them

[sarah]

Boy oh boy I can relate to this! great write

[Just Cat]

I have to admit, I love the entire piece. From the first words to the last. I don't even know what it is specifically about it, I just LOVE IT.

'You should know; I’m not mad at you
Nor hate you
I can’t, you still mean the world to me
A Fallen Hero…
I still like you more than I should.'

^--- So relatable for me, love it. Keep up the good work! :)

[Thea]

Yes, sometimes when you're hurt, you just wish to be away from that person to avoid hurting yourself. Really can relate to it! Well done!!! ^^

[Carrion.]

L-O-V-E it.
sounds like a song in the making
xb
{JS}

[Daytonight]

I can relate to the mixed emotions. Loving and yet hating what it does to you. Wanting and yet pushing away. Well done. Keep on penning.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Oh I relate to this one. Beautifully penned!!