Let Me Die Here.

"You fail at everything Heroine"

Thank you, I love you too.

"Shut your mouth!"

Nah, I'll never shut up.

"Please stay... I can't handle the loss of you.."

As if!!!

"You saved me... Thank you!"

You're welcome...You're not supposed to know I'm dying on the inside..

"I'm so sorry... I can't do this anymore.."

I know... Don't be sorry... I have to accept it... Yet I won't let you go..

"Kill yourself, emo!”

Nope, I'll never give in to you.

"Please...Don't.."

I'm not going to promise I won't..

"I love you My Fallen Heroine."

D****t... I miss those words...

"Please don't give in, he's not worth it.."

But... I love him so... But I guess you're right... I don't want him to feel bad because of me..

"YOU BROKE ME!!!!"

I'm so f*****g sorry... I never meant to make you fall..

"Keep your head held high, you're strong girl."

No... No I'm not... I'm The Weak Pathetic Infantile Fallen F*****g Heroine, let me die here.

I'm dying to tell you I still want you...

But don't come back because you feel like saving me.

It's okay if you don't.

I've done more harm than good.

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems.
Honest opinion.

I know this one could be a bit more poetic, but I didn't feel like, sooooo~ I don't care.

Reviews

[Calypso]

It's odd what people will say. At times they will say anything to stay on your good side.

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime negative need to be not said. Words can be like pins and needles to the heart. I learn better to hold on to silence and say positive and kind words. Never know if the road may meet again? A strong ending to a powerful poem.
Coyote

[Just Cat]

I don't think it would have the same effect if it was more poetic, sometimes we just need to vent I guess. I do that too.
I like this way of doing a poem, no fancy literary techniques or thinking about how to write, it's just... more like a conversation with yourself.
Your writing style/themes seem very relatable to me and I will keep reading your pieces! Nice work :)

[Sleeping Maiden]

I like it. =D so relatable! Great write! so full of hurt and i like how the poem is through your inner self and your concious.

[Thea]

Hmm...I really can relate to your poem...Though it's not that poetic at some points, it was really well written...While reading it, I felt how you're feeling...Anyway, you did a great work here...Keep writing and more power! ^^

[Carrion.]

i really like it.. if you dont understand some poetry you cant really undertsnad this..but i completly understand it...
AfreakingMAZING

[Daytonight]

`I really like this a lot! I can so relate to it! Keep on penning!

[Lily Mae]

We do have tendencies to hurt ourselves far more then the initial blows from our lovers or friends.. I think this is an excellent write..and you shared these type emotions really well.. xx :)

[Becky C Strukamp]

So real to life these feelings of living or dieing due to a lost love, a love gone wrong, a love lost..you got to the heart of it...very well done!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I liked this dialogue between your conscious mind and sub-conscious!