Chaos In Mind.

I don’t understand…

My feelings confuse me…

There’s way too many…

So damn many that I can’t control it…

My mind is filled with chaos…

I can’t keep my head held high…

Tears run down, becomes as one…

Pain replaces pain…

Anguish replaces anguish…

Who can free me from this hell of a life?

Who’s strong enough?

I’m not…

Not as strong as my agony…

They’re consuming my mind…

They’re sneaking up on me…

Quietly they awaits any peaceful moment and ruin it..

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[Daytonight]

Raw emotion poured in. I can understand this. Love the last line! Keep on penning.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Pain and confusion penned so well...........

[Becky C Strukamp]

Well penned feelings and emotions..very nice.

[Carrion.]

-relation- :l
i love it. you have that talent to find the words, and write out your emotions. you cant describe sad by just saying " feeling bad " theres aloot more too it than that.

[Dragon]

This is a great poem. I like how you always put every hard feeling into this. The words combine and create a good mood. Amazing. :)

[Pretty Ugly]

I can relate a lot. I really liked this poem..