Chaos In Mind.

I don’t understand…

My feelings confuse me…

There’s way too many…

So damn many that I can’t control it…

My mind is filled with chaos…

I can’t keep my head held high…

Tears run down, becomes as one…

Pain replaces pain…

Anguish replaces anguish…

Who can free me from this hell of a life?

Who’s strong enough?

I’m not…

Not as strong as my agony…

They’re consuming my mind…

They’re sneaking up on me…

Quietly they awaits any peaceful moment and ruin it..

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

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I can relate. The words and flow have impact.

[Calypso]

Great one

[Just Cat]

Yet another relatable piece. You certainly know how to write with emotion and openess and I take my hat off to you.
Simple, emotional and defintely my style!
Keep writing :)

[Forest Green]

Hauntiingly torturous, these thoughts and troubles come through as a contrary tempest against all things good. Hanging on to some semblance of strength in the middle of a vengeful wind...

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

sorrow without barriers,
pain without salve,
"Who’s strong enough?
I’m not…"
he will come along....do have patience,
(*_*)

[Homeschool]

A strong, flowing structure interlaced with deep, dark inhibitions and questions, this piece is passionately desperate. I like the fact that it throws convention out the window, dealing with abstract ideas rather than concrete poetic imagery. It's refreshing, and it gets to the point. Bravo.

[Gilbert Saint]

Are you in emotional turmoil, coz lately all your work is so emotional. But anyway, like the use of elipses instead of question marks, it leaves one wondering instead of asking

[deeps]

Such an emotional write, written and expressed so well.

[Coyote Poetry]

Hard to find any sort of peace. I find peace in reading and writing. You asked many good questions in the poem. Freedom come when we understand life is hard and we need to appreciate the good moments. Than you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[.n.]

I feel you sister, it can be tough. You really have a grasp of this theme, and you express your feelings well. Keep your head up...it gets better.