So Far.

I’m bleeding my heart out

I never wanted you to leave

But I guess it was the best for you

All of our fights haunted us

Dreams of you and I, haunts me

I’ve never tried so hard

So hard to get someone back

But I know it’s a waste of time, right?

You won’t make me come crawling back to you

Beg of you to bring me back to life?

Well, I don’t quiet care

Or, do I?

I don’t know anymore

Everything seem to be so far from reality

I wish I could hear your voice..

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion.

Reviews

[Forest Green]

Heartfelt and honest confession to love's lingering hold; kindly holding on to romance.

[.n.]

You articulate your feelings well here. This reads like a letter to a lover who has jilted you; less like poetry. It is a good expression of feelings though, and once again I think most of us have experienced feelings like this in our lives.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Beautifully penned. I can feel the anguish in this piece. Nice job!

[Tasha]

This was beautifully written but so sad, I have been there before. Things will get better.
♥ Ta'Shandra