So Far.

I’m bleeding my heart out

I never wanted you to leave

But I guess it was the best for you

All of our fights haunted us

Dreams of you and I, haunts me

I’ve never tried so hard

So hard to get someone back

But I know it’s a waste of time, right?

You won’t make me come crawling back to you

Beg of you to bring me back to life?

Well, I don’t quiet care

Or, do I?

I don’t know anymore

Everything seem to be so far from reality

I wish I could hear your voice..

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The wishes and the wants. Can confuse the most of us. I like the emotion and the desire in this poem. When we miss someone. Little things are missed like the voice. Thank you for a excellent poem.

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When reading, one can sense how unsure the poem's speaker is about everything she/he is feeling. I think your words capture this emotion well.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Separation in sweet sorrow.

[Calypso]

Great emotional write

[Just Cat]

I read this and nearly cried. I can relate to this, but not from your perspective, but from the other side and it kinda sucks.
I DO LIKE IT THOUGH. In fact, I love the emotion, the rawness, the way it's been written, it's very REAL.
Very well done :)

[Carrion.]

i love it.. this reminds me of a song... every try writing lyrics?
it actually reminds me of a BFMV song in a way. haha. great job :D

[Lily Mae]

A great write on wanting and yet not... loving the love and hating the pain... You did a great job expressing that..x

[Dragon]

The words and feelings you put in this poem really stands out. I can almost feel what you're feeling and the sounds of the pain you're suffering. I enjoyed readig this poem. Great write. :)

[Daytonight]

I can understand this feeling of not wanting to let go yet trying to pretend you don't care and yet not sure of how you feel except just plain hurt. Well done. Keep on penning.

[Gilbert Saint]

its really a paradoxical poem, you want the person but don't want them. Hmm, it works though