I'm The Deepest Cut.

I am the deepest cut in your life

I am the pain you can’t get rid off

I tore you open

I was allowed to step into your heart

Yet you threw me away

Was I nothing more than a thing?

I’m starting to doubt what we had

Was it all a dream?

A lie I enjoyed?

I’m stuck in your dark shadows

The living dead scream my name

They arise from their graves

Why am I stuck in this hell!?

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[.n.]

Again, I think your theme is one that many people can relate to. Your style is very consistent. Nice work.

[Daytonight]

I understand exactly what you are saying. Being stuck in this hell is a total nightmare. Thanks for writing this.

[Dragon]

This sounds so painful. You put a lot of emotion into this and you make the reader feel the same pain as the words express. Like daggers digging into skin, the words you wrote means something huge. Great poem. :)