I'm The Deepest Cut.

I am the deepest cut in your life

I am the pain you can’t get rid off

I tore you open

I was allowed to step into your heart

Yet you threw me away

Was I nothing more than a thing?

I’m starting to doubt what we had

Was it all a dream?

A lie I enjoyed?

I’m stuck in your dark shadows

The living dead scream my name

They arise from their graves

Why am I stuck in this hell!?

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Your poetry is flourishing:)
You will be a famous poet-ess one day

[light and ashes]

I really like this, very heart breaking.
These lines are my favorite: "I'm stuck in your dark shadows. The living dead scream my name. They arise from their graves. Why am I stuck in this hell?"
Very nice and enjoyable to read :]

[Gilbert Saint]

Is it hell or love gone wrong, anyway, its good, very strong display of emotion, due to the use of strong words-hell.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

really good write, nicely written, truth, emotion, hurt... i enjoyed this, great words in these lines; love the title, awesome beginning to end :D

[Carrion.]

love it..

[Ange]

Love the truth... 100/100

[alerodri]

love the emotion i understand , beliving u mean the word to a person just to find out u r nothing to them u really made me feel something i forgot or traid to god this makes u dig deep in uour soul

[Coyote Poetry]

Great words and emotion in this poem. Many kind of people in this world. Takers, abusers and runners. These are the one easy to I.D. Better to have long talks and see what lies in the mind and heart. Your poem is true. When someone gets in.
"I’m stuck in your dark shadows"
I like the complete poem. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Calypso]

I like the metaphor. Wonderful read

[Becky C Strukamp]

Such pain in this poem. Yes I definitely relate. Well penned!!