The End.

I'm reaching

Reaching for the end

The end of this terrible nightmare

How come you can manage?

How come you can live it through?

Please let me to rest

I know everything will be just fine in the end

Eternal light is all I ask for

Is it too much?

“How come you can cope when the one you truly loved left?”

What am I supposed to say?

“because I can.”

No…

“Because I am a weak pathetic Fallen Heroine, who can’t seem to find eternal light…”

Yeah, that sounds a lot better

There’s nothing I can say to make you come back

“Are you okay Heroine?”

What should I say?

“Yeah I am perfectly fine, nothing had happened.”

Should I smile and say

“I’m fine thanks, no worries.”

Nah…

Why should I lie?

The serpent winding up to him

“Go on, do it, take the god damn chance, everything will be okay, I’ll help you through.”

With a smile on its face, the world came crashing down

Fallen’s Heroine fell from the sky

Her wings couldn’t keep her up

A raven sat on her chest

Started to pick her heart out

Bloody the raven looked up

“Look what you did to her.”

As it look down, he started crying.

Devastated and lonely she reached the end,but that end... 

Weren't what she wanted.

"Where's your loving heart?"

That was the last thing she ever said

The last thing she'll ever say.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems.
Honest Opinion As Always.

Reviews

[alerodri]

u made me sick, u made me cry, I fell uor pain tha same happend to me and i am still not over all he did to me, to his day he cannot see me eye to eye. I feel u know me and i know u that good u capture our soul in this poem. And sometimes it can feel there is no other way our but that way

[Drako]

this was quite dark. I would not say you are weak or pathetic because you search for light, love, or warmth. These are things we all search for. To be human is to experience ups and downs. The test of self comes from the ability to fall and pick oneself back up

[Coyote Poetry]

You are never a loser if you have tried to love. I look back at the separations and would not wanted to missed not one. Each touch open new doors and create more pleasure then pain. I like the way you described your emotion. The mind and heart can twist things up. We must hold on to the good times and appreciate the opportunity to open new doors. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Calypso]

Full of emotion and feeling
great write

[.n.]

This is dark and despairing, but at the same time I think you capture a feeling that a lot of people can relate to. I can remember feeling this way at times in my life.

[Forest Green]

Metaphors abound in your poem of sorrow magnified by the world's indifference; you demonstrate the vulnerability felt by a young heart wanting open skies and love to give lift to wounded wings. There is a search for significance that comes through as well as a longing for shared emotions.

Troubling write...too true to life.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I think you should cultivate vegetables and raise a small orchard F.H,
You know its a great hobby and there is a new meaning to life when you grow something with your own hands,
why veggies? why fruit? cuz you need the natural nutrients , the vitamins silly.....
and why pay when you have made hay while the Sun has shone?
Prepare the soil, plant the seeds, segregate the beds, water them...protect the saplings....build a fence...watch them grow...your very own...you their life giver...you their master...you their protector and nourisher....
they look up to you....and when the time comes to bear fruit they will gladly give their fruit to you...the you will know ....what it means to the one who gave you your life...to see you wholesome and healthy....you a twinkle in their eye...you who have made them parents...proud and wealthy...
your poem is one of your best works....i have read all your work but not commented on most...this poem...yes....you are havin your say......while im havin mine too.....dont scare me...the way you do! (*_*)

[ivizarx]

sad, depressive, dark, and heartfelt. it's almost like a emotional smash and bash on the bright outlook of things to come. it's really overflowing of pain and misery to the point it becomes a lil disturbing... really enjoyed the poem to the point I can say good work yet again. the only thing though, as for constructive criticism, over-elongated lines are a hard thing to pull off and usually knocks off the flow of the poem, just suggesting to cut them back down to size and trim them a bit and try and keep a good rhythm throughout. other than that, job well done ^_^

[Daytonight]

I can relate to the heartache in this poem. Well done.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a good poem. I thought you did an excellent job on writing this. Good work. Thanks for sharing.